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iDo Love Him (iCarly fanfic) 
25th-Jul-2008 06:04 pm
Poll #1229680 iDo Love Him

What did you think?

1 star (bad grammar, bad spelling, out of character, the worst.)
2 stars
3 stars (in character, bad spelling, good grammar.)
4 stars
5 stars (in character, great spelling, good grammar.)
Title: iDo Love Him
Rating: All Ages
Fandom: iCarly
Summary: Hi, I'm Sam. This is how I feel about Freddie. It's not what most people would think. I wish it was. I have a reputation though. If only he didn't like Carly. Then I'd have a closer chance. When Valerie became his g irlfriend, I wanted to break them up for two reasons. Because she was using him, and because I feel this way about him. If only he didn't like Carly, then I might act how I truly feel.

I do love him. Nobody will ever know though.

What does it matter? He loves Carly. That time when she gave him that nose kiss; I tried to hide my eyes so I wouldn't cry. 

When I got in my room though, I cried as hard as I could. 

My mom asked me why I was crying. I didn’t answer her though.

Several weeks later, when Freddie said something like, “when a g irl rips on a guy it’s because she likes him.”

That’s how I feel.

I wish I could be his true love, but let’s face it. That’s Carly.

Look at the Facts, Seddie, Sick, Sam/Freddie
24th-Aug-2008 02:07 am (UTC)
I squealed at your story, it was cute and even though it had some mistakes I loved it. Please write more stories.
24th-Aug-2008 02:51 am (UTC)
What mistakes does it have? Please tell me, I can fix them.

Thanks for the comment. And yes, I plan on writing more stories. I have two Seddie stories I'm working on right now called "iAm Alone with A Dork" and "iOnly had one kiss". They will posted on Sam_freddie.
24th-Aug-2008 04:01 am (UTC)
Freddie was spelled wrong, I think you meant "When a girl rips on a guy it's because she likes him". Only two mistakes, that is why I gave you a four out of five. Ohh you made my night, I can't wait to read your stories and of course they will be posted on here,;).
24th-Aug-2008 01:32 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I spell Freddie's name like Freddy.

And I fixed the "When a g irl rips on a guy it's because she likes him" thing.

My computer doesn't let me type things like 'g irl' or 'n aked' without a space between part of the word.
8th-Feb-2009 09:33 am (UTC) - Loved it!
I totally loved it. So cute. I'm actually listening to iKiss right now. I loved the story but I wish it had a happy ending.
8th-Feb-2009 10:04 pm (UTC) - Re: Loved it!
Thanks. :)
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